Doug and Charlie: The Satellite Swap | Two-Hundred-Word Story

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The stakes of the take and trade game grew much higher when Charlie snatched Doug’s satellite phone from his deckside hammock. This was the zoologist’s critical link to the outside world. He’d only stepped away for a moment, but came back to see Charlie scampering up a liana holding the Garmin Mini by its lanyard. The little bugger settled twenty feet higher up in the canopy, casually chewing on the gadget’s rubber antenna. Doug knew he had to act quickly, before Charlie lost interest and dropped the device sixty feet to the forest floor. A few other monkeys from the troop emerged from the thick foliage, chattering and watching their friend with the little black rectangle. This gave Doug an idea: use the rest of the group to bring back Charlie. He went inside for some some dried figs, spreading them out on the deck. It worked! The group descended, chirping pleasantly, including Charlie who was still lugging the phone with him. As the monkeys gathered for an impromptu picnic, the thief tossed it back on the empty hammock and dove in for his share. Doug sighed in relief: “At least he puts things back where he found them.”

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  1. The Devotional Guy™ Avatar

    Now you have me curious about squirrel monkeys… I can’t tell you enough how much I love these two characters and the growing relationship between them. I sensed a slight moral lesson at the end, too? Even better! Keep up the good work, David. It’s a great story.

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    1. davidsdailydose Avatar

      Thanks, brother! These two characters came out of me trying to keep all my devices charged. I jokingly thought I needed a little monkey to plug them in at night, if I forget to do it. I started researching small monkeys and how they act, and the story began.
      I greatly appreciate your encouragement and enthusiasm for my stories, and blogging in general.
      I hope you and Terri have a great day!
      Did the Rangers win yesterday?

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      1. The Devotional Guy™ Avatar

        I love it! No, they lost 6-3 in the 10th, after coming back in the 8th, after being down 3-1.

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