The 1000th Dollar | Drabble

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Every morning, a woman arrives at her bank. “I want to withdraw one dollar from my account, please.” The employees assume she’s just lonely. But why a dollar? This goes on for years. Until one day, the grey-haired matron doesn’t appear. Concerned, the bank manager calls the police. Inside the lady’s home, they find one thousand one-dollar bills folded into origami cranes and strung together. But the eccentric woman is missing. A detective investigates. Unfolding the one-thousandth crane, he uncovers a clue. Across the margin of the bill she wrote, “I’m going home tonight.” The woman was never found.


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  1. The Devotional Guy™ Avatar

    Very poignant. I like the angles you take in these stories, David. I think they are clever and inventive.

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    1. davidsdailydose Avatar

      Thank you, Rainer. I worked on this one longer than any I’ve written. My first draft I shared with Nancy, and she didn’t get the ending. So, I kept editing until she nodded her head. My analytical wife is a good balance for my poet’s soul.

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      1. The Devotional Guy™ Avatar

        Wives make good editors. 🙏

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  2. PurpleCat64 Avatar

    Awww, and she couldn’t take it with her.

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    1. davidsdailydose Avatar

      Nope. Wherever she went.

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