Real to Me | Double Drabble


You hear a bit of everything at a barbershop; even religion and politics are fair game.

While a brown-skinned man waits for his turn in the chair, he buys a Coke from the vintage soda machine. The owner, Scottie still sells them in glass bottles for fifty cents.

Juan immigrated from Mexico with his family when he was six years old, because his father feared the warring drug cartels that threatened their mountain village.

Dad found work in construction, and his son first joined him on a job site when he was only sixteen years old.

Two years later, Juan’s dad was killed in a tragic accident. Juan then became the sole provider for his mother, who spoke little English.

Thankfully the young man flourished. Setting rebar and pouring concrete in the blazing sun became like walking and breathing.

Yet, he was often wary. Federal agents might come at any moment, detaining those who couldn’t prove they were United States citizens. All Juan can prove is that he’s a survivor.

Back at the barbershop, he finishes his Coke, while a man in the barber chair talks about “real” Americans. Juan doesn’t react, but inside he smiles. “It’s real to me.”


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  1. Alan Kearns Avatar

    This is a powerful message David, which applies to hard working immigrants in any country. Good job mate 👍

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    1. davidsdailydose Avatar

      Thank you, Alan. Here in the South Central U.S. there are many highly skilled Mexican immigrants who are willing to work all day in the heat, like Juan in my story. Most of them are simply making a living like everyone else. I appreciate your reading and commenting. 🙏🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿🇺🇸

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      1. Alan Kearns Avatar

        Here in the UK immigration is a volatile subject, but many forget that our beloved economy and precious NHS (National Health Service) would be in serious trouble if it wasn’t for the hard-working legal immigrants. These folk are not stealing jobs, but doing work that many in the UK are unwilling to do.

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      2. davidsdailydose Avatar

        It’s the same here in the U.S. We are, after all, a nation of immigrants. My little branch of the Duncan clan left the British Isles about 275 years ago seeking a new life in what became the U. S. State of North Carolina. They were farmers. Many folk in my country have a similar background. More of us need to remember from whence we came.

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  2. The Devotional Guy™ Avatar

    Although I don’t spend any time in barber shops these days, I agree with Alan that this is absolutely a strong story with a powerful message, David. Good work. Keep the words coming!

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    1. davidsdailydose Avatar

      You were in the back of my mind as I wrote this one, brother. The details may differ a bit, but your family became real Americans, too.

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      1. The Devotional Guy™ Avatar

        Thank you, brother. This is a topic that hits close to home for me and one I’ve thought about and wrestled with for years, especially in recent ones, given the current temperature surging around who is and isn’t American, let alone who can come here and how. You’ve given me food for thought. 🙏 Blessings to you and Nancy today. I may (or may not) have read somewhere that border crossings from Oklahoma to Texas are down this year. 😉

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      2. davidsdailydose Avatar

        Very funny! I tell folks that I’m from Texoma—since I grew up about an hour north of the Texas state line.

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